Devil clawed her
Ogre not human
Mighty lady affected
Extremely in pain
Survives iniquity of
Thorny demon to
Ignite the world
Combat the evil
Voice her pain
Intensify the revenge
Obligate the action
Lets fight his
Evil together to
Nullify its future
Crush the violence
Ever and forever
written for Acrostic Only...!!!
10 comments:
Good attempt. Use of simple words as opposed to a verbose style would immensely improve your Acrostic.
A sad tale of domestic violence Yamini!
very beautiful words..
still think u can do better! :)
You are doing well Yamini, you keep on writing ... because we all can feel you on this one.
@Saras
will try using simple words..!!! thanks friend..!!!
@Amity
true dear...!!!
@Leo
will do it better...thanks dear..!!!
@Amias
thank you di....am trying to do it my best..hope i can do all of them this month..!!!
You're doing a great job with these prompts.
@Ofira
thank you friend..!!
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