Thursday, March 18, 2010

DOMESTIC VIOLENCE

Devil clawed her
Ogre not human
Mighty lady affected
Extremely in pain
Survives iniquity of
Thorny demon to
Ignite the world
Combat the evil

Voice her pain
Intensify the revenge
Obligate the action
Lets fight his
Evil together to
Nullify its future
Crush the violence
Ever and forever

written for Acrostic Only...!!!

10 comments:

Saras said...

Good attempt. Use of simple words as opposed to a verbose style would immensely improve your Acrostic.

Amity said...

A sad tale of domestic violence Yamini!

Leo said...

very beautiful words..
still think u can do better! :)

Amias said...

You are doing well Yamini, you keep on writing ... because we all can feel you on this one.

Yamini Meduri said...

@Saras

will try using simple words..!!! thanks friend..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amity

true dear...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

will do it better...thanks dear..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

thank you di....am trying to do it my best..hope i can do all of them this month..!!!

Ofira Sephiroth said...

You're doing a great job with these prompts.

Yamini Meduri said...

@Ofira

thank you friend..!!