Tuesday, March 23, 2010

POLICE BRUTALITY

Positioned to protect
Our petty lives
Licensed to stop
Illegal acts, helping
Create a happy
Environ to live

But some disturb
Rather obliterate peace
Using their rights
They are destructing
Arena of humanity
Lying in blood
Innocent lives go
Through the torture
Yesterday today tomorrow

Written for Acrostic Only...!!!

13 comments:

Saras said...

Very well made Acrostic. Brings out the stages of "Intent", "Reality" and "Future?". Excellent take on the prompt.

Yamini Meduri said...

@saras

thanks dear..!!!

Ofira Sephiroth said...

Very nicely written

Yamini Meduri said...

@Ofira

thanks friend..!!

Amity said...

Very true Yamini!

You said it well~!

Amity said...

I hate some policemen...I have had one tragic experience, not me actually, but a distant relative, an innocent mute and deaf boy who suffered from the cruel hands of a police!

I want to kick his ass everytime I see him!

Leo said...

well, this was more of the yami soulful acrostics..

liked this.. u've done marvelously well :)

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amity

thank you dear..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amity

Am with you..kick him...!!! yeah i know that its not easy...but..lets hope it happens..!!!

am thinking of all those who are the sufferers of such a brutal act...Peace to them...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

Thank you dear...!!!

I feel complete when you say my acrostic is good...thank you dear..!!

Amias said...

You did very well on this one, but I disagree with the second lines, our lives are not "petty", but that just my opinions. ;)

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

thank you dear...but i considered the another meaning for Petty...Petty means LITTLE..so i think our lives are little...wat say??

vidya said...

you said this really well, Yamini..
I'am yet to read your other acros..will do soon.