Tuesday, March 30, 2010

NEGLECTED ELDERS

Nights they spent
Ensuring their children
Gain peaceful rest
Love they showered
Endlessly waiting to
Catch when they
Throw it back
Ever will they
Devote now wondered

Every heart waits
Lying in dreams
Dreams fade away
Entrusting little hope
Ripping off the
Starved souls' desire

Written for Acrostic Only...!!!

4 comments:

Saras said...

Nice one, Yamini. Well done.

Leo said...

its definitely a bit hard hitting...
i can see ur soul in it, yet i felt something missing. maybe its just me yaar..

well written! :)

Yamini Meduri said...

@saras

thanks friend..!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

hmmm....thank you...but from next time..let me know what actually is missing in the acro ok..!!

juss kidding..!!