Wednesday, March 24, 2010

HUMAN TORTURE

Harassed souls are
Unable to express
Merciless human action
Agony of heart
Neither can I

Torment to human
Obstruct lets together
Ruptured souls imploring
Terribly for help
Unless we fight
Remains will never
Efface from humanity

Written for Acrostic Only...!!!

6 comments:

Leo said...

compared with ur previous two(4&5 prompts) this seemed off...

it does the trick, but still i felt something missing..

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

once again??? :(:(...thanks yaar...will try n make it better..!!

Amity said...

We should not tolerate or should we turn a blind eye if we see any perpetrator or victim with this inhumane act!

Nice Yamini!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amity

If we turn blind...we are not gonna live any more...the humanity will extinct...we have to fight...even if its gonna cost our lives..!!!

Amias said...

The first stanza is good, just need work on the second one. You are doing good Yamini Meduri .. keep up the good work!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

thank you dear...waiting for you suggestions for the second stanza..!!