Friday, December 18, 2009

SNOW FLAKES..!!!



S
o chilling
N
erve biting
O
verwhelming feeling
W
e enjoy, with you

F
orever
L
ive with us
A
s your beauty
Kisses our senses
Eternally
S
pecial you are..!!!

written for: Acrostic Only..!!!

7 comments:

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

I like the first two lines in the first stanza, and the last stanza. But remove the periods and the exclamation marks.

You must think about the meaning of the word and then look at different words you can used to make it more readable. Example:

"Snowstorms
Nerve biting
Overpowering
Wet sensation"


I said the same thing, but the words I chose are more creative and paint a complete picture. Now try and rethink the last stanza, careful with your words.

Saras said...

Dear Yamini,
You have remarkable talent for penning the most beautiful thoughts on a variety of sublects. All you need is a bit of descriptive touch which I am sure one can gain by practice. My idea of snow flakes would be:
Surreal
Numbing
Ostentatious
Waft

Floating
Lightly
Across
Keeping
Everyone
Spellbound
Looking forward to more Acrostics.

Saras said...

spelling error "subjects" lol

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

thank you dear..!!!

will try n do it again..n post it to u..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

glad to recieve this message di..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Saras

thank you friend...love to be better and will prove myself everytime..!!!

nice attempt dear..!!1

Yamini Meduri said...

@Saras

its ok yaar...mistakes always happen..Big Deal..!!!