tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post1419929482118647117..comments2023-08-12T08:57:53.065-07:00Comments on My Insights...!!!: SNOW FLAKES..!!!Yamini Medurihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-42341886915479660752010-01-04T20:18:10.129-08:002010-01-04T20:18:10.129-08:00@Saras
its ok yaar...mistakes always happen..Big ...@Saras<br /><br />its ok yaar...mistakes always happen..Big Deal..!!!Yamini Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-82694543664818531472010-01-04T20:17:50.198-08:002010-01-04T20:17:50.198-08:00@Saras
thank you friend...love to be better and w...@Saras<br /><br />thank you friend...love to be better and will prove myself everytime..!!!<br /><br />nice attempt dear..!!1Yamini Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-8239367790325064672010-01-04T20:17:14.297-08:002010-01-04T20:17:14.297-08:00@Amias
glad to recieve this message di..!!!@Amias<br /><br />glad to recieve this message di..!!!Yamini Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-64178390897243336302010-01-04T20:16:55.416-08:002010-01-04T20:16:55.416-08:00@Amias
thank you dear..!!!
will try n do it agai...@Amias<br /><br />thank you dear..!!!<br /><br />will try n do it again..n post it to u..!!!Yamini Medurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11723116856510079269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-5978835802562860862010-01-03T12:47:51.864-08:002010-01-03T12:47:51.864-08:00spelling error "subjects" lolspelling error "subjects" lolSarashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09710421804935682833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-90483137930150663512010-01-03T12:46:24.678-08:002010-01-03T12:46:24.678-08:00Dear Yamini,
You have remarkable talent for pennin...Dear Yamini,<br />You have remarkable talent for penning the most beautiful thoughts on a variety of sublects. All you need is a bit of descriptive touch which I am sure one can gain by practice. My idea of snow flakes would be:<br />Surreal<br />Numbing<br />Ostentatious<br />Waft<br /><br />Floating<br />Lightly<br />Across<br />Keeping<br />Everyone<br />Spellbound<br />Looking forward to more Acrostics.Sarashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09710421804935682833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1777049638432578543.post-4288625487612126112009-12-25T12:45:45.696-08:002009-12-25T12:45:45.696-08:00I like the first two lines in the first stanza, an...I like the first two lines in the first stanza, and the last stanza. But remove the periods and the exclamation marks.<br /><br />You must think about the meaning of the word and then look at different words you can used to make it more readable. Example:<br /><br /><b>"Snowstorms<br />Nerve biting<br />Overpowering<br />Wet sensation"</b><br /><br />I said the same thing, but the words I chose are more creative and paint a complete picture. Now try and rethink the last stanza, careful with your words.Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14722413697537828830noreply@blogger.com