Friday, December 18, 2009

SNOW FLAKES..!!!



S
o chilling
N
erve biting
O
verwhelming feeling
W
e enjoy, with you

F
orever
L
ive with us
A
s your beauty
Kisses our senses
Eternally
S
pecial you are..!!!

written for: Acrostic Only..!!!

8 comments:

Amias said...

I like the first two lines in the first stanza, and the last stanza. But remove the periods and the exclamation marks.

You must think about the meaning of the word and then look at different words you can used to make it more readable. Example:

"Snowstorms
Nerve biting
Overpowering
Wet sensation"


I said the same thing, but the words I chose are more creative and paint a complete picture. Now try and rethink the last stanza, careful with your words.

Amias said...

Dear Poet,
If you are receiving this announcement, it means that at one time or another you linked an acrostic poem at Acrostic Only. We are in the process of preparing for our first Acrostic Only Anthology – Volume I. If you care to be a part of this wonderful project, please visit our Blog for more information.

We will be choosing poems to be considered for the Anthology from January – March, 2010. However, if you desire to have some of your work considered, there are a couple of deadlines you will have to meet, and you must email me your intentions to acrosticonly@gmail.com!

I thank you all for supporting Acrostic Only, and I look forward to another year poetic interaction.

Happy New Year to you, your beloved family, and readers!
Amias

Saras said...

Dear Yamini,
You have remarkable talent for penning the most beautiful thoughts on a variety of sublects. All you need is a bit of descriptive touch which I am sure one can gain by practice. My idea of snow flakes would be:
Surreal
Numbing
Ostentatious
Waft

Floating
Lightly
Across
Keeping
Everyone
Spellbound
Looking forward to more Acrostics.

Saras said...

spelling error "subjects" lol

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

thank you dear..!!!

will try n do it again..n post it to u..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

glad to recieve this message di..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Saras

thank you friend...love to be better and will prove myself everytime..!!!

nice attempt dear..!!1

Yamini Meduri said...

@Saras

its ok yaar...mistakes always happen..Big Deal..!!!