Saturday, December 5, 2009

ICE SKATING...!!!


I, on a
C
lear
E
vening

S
aw them
K
eenly
A
rtistically
T
rying to
Innovate
N
ew world
G
racefully on ice..!!!

written for: Acrostics Only...!!!

9 comments:

Leo said...

hmm.. third rank so far from ur three attempts. u can do much better than this I feel Yami :)

yamini meduri said...

@Leo

i knew that u wud say the same for this...even i felt the same....will don it again...!!!

i somehow promptly did this...wrote directly that came to my mind...!!!

nyways thanks dear..!!

Amias said...

But you did describe an "ice skater" very well. This prompt can be a bit confusing, as "skating" is action. Still I like your attempt.

The Write Girl said...

This is a fun poem and paints a vivid picture. I'm sure your rewrite of this prompt will be great as well : )

yamini meduri said...

@Amias

thanks dear...will do it again..!!!

yamini meduri said...

@Write girl

thanks dear..thanks for the wishes...will defly d it soon...!!!

Amity Me said...

each to his own interpretation of the prompt, isn't it? but you made an effort, hence not bad and you did it even on the spot as you said, talent comes out like that!

yamini meduri said...

@Amity

thanks dear...will re do it again..!!!

Maggie said...

You did describe an ice skating team as you watched them on ice and I think you saw them well.