hmm.. third rank so far from ur three attempts. u can do much better than this I feel Yami :)
@Leoi knew that u wud say the same for this...even i felt the same....will don it again...!!!i somehow promptly did this...wrote directly that came to my mind...!!!nyways thanks dear..!!
But you did describe an "ice skater" very well. This prompt can be a bit confusing, as "skating" is action. Still I like your attempt.
This is a fun poem and paints a vivid picture. I'm sure your rewrite of this prompt will be great as well : )
@Amiasthanks dear...will do it again..!!!
@Write girlthanks dear..thanks for the wishes...will defly d it soon...!!!
each to his own interpretation of the prompt, isn't it? but you made an effort, hence not bad and you did it even on the spot as you said, talent comes out like that!
@Amitythanks dear...will re do it again..!!!
You did describe an ice skating team as you watched them on ice and I think you saw them well.
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