I said the same thing, but the words I chose are more creative and paint a complete picture. Now try and rethink the last stanza, careful with your words.
Dear Yamini, You have remarkable talent for penning the most beautiful thoughts on a variety of sublects. All you need is a bit of descriptive touch which I am sure one can gain by practice. My idea of snow flakes would be: Surreal Numbing Ostentatious Waft
Floating Lightly Across Keeping Everyone Spellbound Looking forward to more Acrostics.
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I like the first two lines in the first stanza, and the last stanza. But remove the periods and the exclamation marks.
You must think about the meaning of the word and then look at different words you can used to make it more readable. Example:
"Snowstorms
Nerve biting
Overpowering
Wet sensation"
I said the same thing, but the words I chose are more creative and paint a complete picture. Now try and rethink the last stanza, careful with your words.
Dear Yamini,
You have remarkable talent for penning the most beautiful thoughts on a variety of sublects. All you need is a bit of descriptive touch which I am sure one can gain by practice. My idea of snow flakes would be:
Surreal
Numbing
Ostentatious
Waft
Floating
Lightly
Across
Keeping
Everyone
Spellbound
Looking forward to more Acrostics.
spelling error "subjects" lol
@Amias
thank you dear..!!!
will try n do it again..n post it to u..!!!
@Amias
glad to recieve this message di..!!!
@Saras
thank you friend...love to be better and will prove myself everytime..!!!
nice attempt dear..!!1
@Saras
its ok yaar...mistakes always happen..Big Deal..!!!
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