Saturday, April 18, 2009

OPPORTUNITY...!!!


Over a life time, it seldom comes
Peeps into your personnel world
Piercing you, to take it
Open the door, it calls you
Rarely we accept it on time
Time delayed, it leaves us off
Unseen distances it goes to
Never it comes back, we tend to think
Inner self tells us that it will
Truth but we dont believe in
Yet, my dear, it knocks you again
posted at: Acrostics only

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow yammi, that was a good read! :)

i've yet to think of words for the post! and u have already posted within minutes of me telling u about it? i told u that u were more spontaneous than me!

this proves me right! :)

The Write Girl said...

Wonderful poem...this does capture the essence of opportunity.

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

You slam dump this one --- you indeed captured the prompt. Thank you for your insight.

anthonynorth said...

You've taken the opportunity to capture it well here.

Juggernaut said...

Wow great poem genius.
The poem is really a good combination of words and thought.
And it goes straight inside the heart.

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

thanks yaar...its my pleasure and thanks to my heart that helps me write so fast..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@The write girl

thanks friend....do come back..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Amias

thanks friend..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Anthonynorth

thanks friend..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Jaggernut

thanks HR...!!!

Winnie the poohi said...

good one!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Winnie the poohi

thanks girl....keep coming..!!!

Priya Joyce said...

lovely!!

simply loved it

Yamini Meduri said...

@PJ

thanks buddy..!!!

Tan said...

Right... Opportunity knocks again and again... some can see, some cannot... but it comes for sure!!

Happiness!!

Ofira Sephiroth said...

Wonderful poem and the picture works very well.

Nave said...

:) this is cool :) nicely done :)

Nave said...

:) Nailed it !