Over a life time, it seldom comes
Peeps into your personnel world
Piercing you, to take it
Open the door, it calls you
Rarely we accept it on time
Time delayed, it leaves us off
Unseen distances it goes to
Never it comes back, we tend to think
Inner self tells us that it will
Truth but we dont believe in
Yet, my dear, it knocks you again
posted at: Acrostics only
18 comments:
wow yammi, that was a good read! :)
i've yet to think of words for the post! and u have already posted within minutes of me telling u about it? i told u that u were more spontaneous than me!
this proves me right! :)
Wonderful poem...this does capture the essence of opportunity.
You slam dump this one --- you indeed captured the prompt. Thank you for your insight.
You've taken the opportunity to capture it well here.
Wow great poem genius.
The poem is really a good combination of words and thought.
And it goes straight inside the heart.
@Leo
thanks yaar...its my pleasure and thanks to my heart that helps me write so fast..!!!
@The write girl
thanks friend....do come back..!!!
@Amias
thanks friend..!!!
@Anthonynorth
thanks friend..!!!
@Jaggernut
thanks HR...!!!
good one!
@Winnie the poohi
thanks girl....keep coming..!!!
lovely!!
simply loved it
@PJ
thanks buddy..!!!
Right... Opportunity knocks again and again... some can see, some cannot... but it comes for sure!!
Happiness!!
Wonderful poem and the picture works very well.
:) this is cool :) nicely done :)
:) Nailed it !
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