Certain hard times
Offered me tears
Never i took them
For the smiles i owned
In me was the desire to live
Now, i am broken into pieces
Every step, i stumbled
Moving towards life
End I found so near
Nerves squeeze with grief
Tomorrow will i ever see??
posted at: Acrostics Only
4 comments:
Pain is a hurting thing, in more ways then one. But when the heart hurts, it so very head to heal that.
I just wanted to let you know I came by and read your rendition on the prompt, Confinement.
This poem conveys the emotions of confinement so much. "Tomorrow will i ever see??" I hope she does!!
i think amias meant to say, Hard to heal..! :)
and i agree with her!
good rendition of confinement, but knowing ur class is a world apart, i was expecting something a bit more better! :) liked it nonetheless! :)
take care yammi! :)
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