Sunday, April 26, 2009

CONFINEMENT...!!!




Certain hard times

Offered me tears

Never i took them

For the smiles i owned

In me was the desire to live

Now, i am broken into pieces

Every step, i stumbled

Moving towards life

End I found so near

Nerves squeeze with grief

Tomorrow will i ever see??

posted at: Acrostics Only

4 comments:

Amias said...

Pain is a hurting thing, in more ways then one. But when the heart hurts, it so very head to heal that.

Maggie said...

I just wanted to let you know I came by and read your rendition on the prompt, Confinement.

The Write Girl said...

This poem conveys the emotions of confinement so much. "Tomorrow will i ever see??" I hope she does!!

Leo said...

i think amias meant to say, Hard to heal..! :)
and i agree with her!

good rendition of confinement, but knowing ur class is a world apart, i was expecting something a bit more better! :) liked it nonetheless! :)

take care yammi! :)