Saturday, May 1, 2010

ESCAPE..!!!

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 10; the tenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
As I read the lines
from his book
with immense pleasure
I closed my eyes

As I read the last lines
I raised my chin high
proud to be a woman
the mother of the world

As I closed my eyes
in happiness, I escaped
into my special world
where I am always complete

Believe it or not
I was at my best there
feeling special
amidst the beauty

As the birds sing
as the chimes swing
I bow down
to salute the legend

This is dedicated to Rabindranath Tagore, for his beautiful poem about a woman...I salute you sir..!!!

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26 comments:

Leo said...

prosaic poetry, i felt.. but it had that zeal in it Yamii! :) lovely dedication!

welcome to Blog-A-Ton! :)

Yamini Meduri said...

@Leo

Thank you dear..!!!

Mahesh Kalaal said...

Nice one...
though i am poor in analyzing poetry, i could get the feel and mood out of it..
keep expressing...

The Fool said...

Interesting take.

welcome to Blog-A-Ton! :)

Yamini Meduri said...

@Mahesh Kalaal

Thank you dear...!!!

Welcome to Share my Insights...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@The Fool

thank you friend...thanks a ton..!!!

Welcome to share my insights too..!!!

Sureindran said...

Nice and like the poetic feeling. Do you read books? What sorts?

Sureindran R. - Escape

Nethra said...

Nice poem:)and you dedicated it to Rabindranath Tagore. kewl! :)

Shilpa said...

Salute to the gr8 poet :)

Gyanban said...

hI this sure is an interesting piece...which poem were you inspired by?

tikulicious said...

I liked your poem.
I think poems convey a much deeper meaning.. Best wishes to you .

Yamini Meduri said...

@mahesh

thank you dear..!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Sureindram

thank you dear...!!!

i read a lot...poetry, fiction, non-fiction...!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Nethra

yeah...inspired by his Geetanjali..!!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Shilpa

thank you dear..!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Gyanban

thank you dear....It has no special title...Its abt a woman from Gitanjali..!!1

Yamini Meduri said...

@Tikulicious

thank you dear..!!

Yamini Meduri said...

@Everyone

thanks for checking on my insights...keep coming to know more..!!!

Karan Shah said...

very well written and expressed

Yamini Meduri said...

@Karan Shah

thank you dear..!!!

evanescentthoughts said...

A poem dedicated to Tagore. That was really too good. I was wondering who the "him" was in the poem initially. I guess this is your first entry to Blog-a-ton right?

blabberblah said...

I say:

Beautiful poetry! Perhaps the best I've read this BAT.

All the best and keep writing! :)

Vipul Grover said...

Interesting Yamini.. It wud hav been gr8 if u hd also given a link to tht poem by Tagore.. nd yeah welcome 2 blog-a-ton.. keep participating :)

Ms.Meduri said...

@evanescentthoughts

thank you dear..!!! yeah this is the first time at BAT...!!!

Ms.Meduri said...

@blabberblah

thank you dear..!!!

Ms.Meduri said...

@Vipul Grover

thank you dear...actually i read the poem from gitanjali...that i own...so donot have any link to it..!!!

will check out and if i find the link will link to my post ASAP..!!!