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As I read the lines
from his book
with immense pleasure
I closed my eyes
As I read the last lines
I raised my chin high
proud to be a woman
the mother of the world
As I closed my eyes
in happiness, I escaped
into my special world
where I am always complete
Believe it or not
I was at my best there
feeling special
amidst the beauty
As the birds sing
as the chimes swing
I bow down
to salute the legend
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with immense pleasure
I closed my eyes
As I read the last lines
I raised my chin high
proud to be a woman
the mother of the world
As I closed my eyes
in happiness, I escaped
into my special world
where I am always complete
Believe it or not
I was at my best there
feeling special
amidst the beauty
As the birds sing
as the chimes swing
I bow down
to salute the legend
This is dedicated to Rabindranath Tagore, for his beautiful poem about a woman...I salute you sir..!!!
26 comments:
prosaic poetry, i felt.. but it had that zeal in it Yamii! :) lovely dedication!
welcome to Blog-A-Ton! :)
@Leo
Thank you dear..!!!
Nice one...
though i am poor in analyzing poetry, i could get the feel and mood out of it..
keep expressing...
Interesting take.
welcome to Blog-A-Ton! :)
@Mahesh Kalaal
Thank you dear...!!!
Welcome to Share my Insights...!!!
@The Fool
thank you friend...thanks a ton..!!!
Welcome to share my insights too..!!!
Nice and like the poetic feeling. Do you read books? What sorts?
Sureindran R. - Escape
Nice poem:)and you dedicated it to Rabindranath Tagore. kewl! :)
Salute to the gr8 poet :)
hI this sure is an interesting piece...which poem were you inspired by?
I liked your poem.
I think poems convey a much deeper meaning.. Best wishes to you .
@mahesh
thank you dear..!!
@Sureindram
thank you dear...!!!
i read a lot...poetry, fiction, non-fiction...!!!
@Nethra
yeah...inspired by his Geetanjali..!!!
@Shilpa
thank you dear..!!
@Gyanban
thank you dear....It has no special title...Its abt a woman from Gitanjali..!!1
@Tikulicious
thank you dear..!!
@Everyone
thanks for checking on my insights...keep coming to know more..!!!
very well written and expressed
@Karan Shah
thank you dear..!!!
A poem dedicated to Tagore. That was really too good. I was wondering who the "him" was in the poem initially. I guess this is your first entry to Blog-a-ton right?
I say:
Beautiful poetry! Perhaps the best I've read this BAT.
All the best and keep writing! :)
Interesting Yamini.. It wud hav been gr8 if u hd also given a link to tht poem by Tagore.. nd yeah welcome 2 blog-a-ton.. keep participating :)
@evanescentthoughts
thank you dear..!!! yeah this is the first time at BAT...!!!
@blabberblah
thank you dear..!!!
@Vipul Grover
thank you dear...actually i read the poem from gitanjali...that i own...so donot have any link to it..!!!
will check out and if i find the link will link to my post ASAP..!!!
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